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"the primordium" 1
page 8
written by Christopher Hill * penciled by John Watson * Colored by Tim Lai
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page 8
written by Christopher Hill * penciled by John Watson * Colored by Tim Lai
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Image Plan (WATSON): Control room. With a view wall separating RS & Federov from the experiments. Lots of electrical balls being funneled into a singular point. The view window covers that singular point. All characters appear to be frustrated with their progress. Ryan is our main character, Pavel is a Russian scientific immigrant who came over in the early 70’s so he breaks in to Russian on occasion and his English is marginal. Both Pavel and Riya look exhausted by Ryan does not he looks like he just got to work. High energy. All have goggles.
Panel 1 – RS is speaking to the Russian via a communications link. The Russians station appears to be almost inside the experiment area. Protected but inside. Both are aggressive towards each other. Federov looks exhausted.
RS: Damn it, it’s still unstable. I thought that you had the dampener aligned?
PAVEL: It was aligned.
RS: Too much external contamination. Something is not aligned properly and we need to find it.
RS: Riya print out the results, we’ll meet in the design room in thirty.
Panel 2 – Federov is not working later under any circumstances. It is already late enough for him. (Clock on the wall showing past 9pm?). He is taking off his goggles.
PAVEL: Nyet, we done enough today. It is late and I going home.
Panel 3 – Pavel exits. Ryan looks pissed and is going to go after him. Riya is the peace maker. Could there be something here? Unsure, nothing more than an arm touch is evident but you never know.
RS: No, we are not done here. We are so close.
Pavel: Always close, always pushing for what? Alana is about to leave because I never home. Pavel: Now I going home.
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Riya: Let it go. Let’s grab dinner and recalibrate the converters afterwards. We can at least know tonight if the sample is actually contaminated.
RS: But we are sooo close.
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Riya: Yes, and we will be sooo close Monday, and the next day and the next …”
RS: Alright, I need to make a quick call to my wife letting her know I’ll be late and then we can go.
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