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"the primordium" 1
page 5
written by Christopher Hill * penciled by John Watson * Colored by Tim Lai
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page 5
written by Christopher Hill * penciled by John Watson * Colored by Tim Lai
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Image Plan – First shot of him using his powers. Quick battle. Definitely David vs. Goliath with the reporter somewhat in shock through it all. This is the first view of his powers outside of his body. We need to be consistent with this.
Panel 1 – Distant shot of amoeba shaped electrical trails emanating from Spencer and surrounding the chopper. They are not lightning based but more static electricity based. We need to really see how impossible one man defeating this high tech copter could be.
Panel 2 – Inside the copter
COPTER PILOT: Base we are experiencing heightened electrical interference from target.
RADIO VOICE: Deploy the net! Your insulation will protect …
COPTER PILOT: Negative base we are off scale we must break off…
RADIO VOICE: Deploy the NET NOW.”
Panel 3 – Multiple shots of the helicopter spinning out and crashing. I am thinking about some panels on top of panels here showing the blades hitting the trees and then the ground. No explosion because they were so low. Just above the trees. They survive the crash. Sound effects however.
Panel 4? – Spencer drops to the ground exhausted.
RS: (Voice of exhaustion) forgive meeee …
Panel 5 – As he is blacking out the panel is as well. His viewpoint on the ground looking up with the reporter yelling at him concerned.
REPORTER: Spencer, Spencer.
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Labels: christopher hill, comic book, graphic novel, john watson, the primordium, tim lai
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