_____________________________________________________________
"the primordium" 1
page 2
written by Christopher Hill * penciled by John Watson * Colored by Tim Lai
____________________________________________________________
page 2
written by Christopher Hill * penciled by John Watson * Colored by Tim Lai
____________________________________________________________
Image Plan: Basically a man walking quickly through the woods talking to himself. To make it more interesting, have him jumping over a log or something to showcase how well he moves. This will be more important later. The dialogue gives a flash of his history and then gets us to his first bit of action.
Panel 1 – See above
RS (thought box): Is this really a good idea? What am I going to tell him…what can I tell him?
Panel 2 – See above
RS: This history stuff is easy, graduate with honors at the top engineering school in the nation.
RS: Government job out of college with a ridiculous grant supplying me with any technology I want.
Panel 3 – See above
RS: My college sweetheart at home along with two beautiful kids and man’s best friend waiting for me to call it a day.
RS: Everything but the white picket fence.
Panel 4 – Stopped. Sees man smoking a cigarette at the edge of a clearing
RS: And just like that it was all gone. How do I tell him what I have done? Can he help find out why this is happening? Wait, is that him?
Images:
Labels: christopher hill, comic book, graphic novel, john watson, the primordium, tim lai
Blogger
RSS