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"the primordium" 1
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written by Christopher Hill * penciled by John Watson * Colored by Tim Lai
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written by Christopher Hill * penciled by John Watson * Colored by Tim Lai
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Image Plan: This page is designed to show how far in the wilderness and desperate our character is. He is average height and decently dressed although his clothes look like he has slept in them for a few days. He is in his early to mid-thirties white male, very stressed. He is in good shape but not overly muscular. He wears sunglasses and has deep scaring on his face leading to them. The trees are mostly oak and elm. Forests have lots of trees but spaced with paths and limited overgrowth.
MOVE TO INSIDE FRONT COVER TOP OF PAGE CAPTION: "If a man dwells on the past, then he robs the present; but if a man ignores the past, he may rob the future. The seeds of our destiny are nurtured by the roots of our past." -- Master Po
TOP OF PAGE CAPTION: Ryan Spencer’s life was on cruise control. A top secret government science job and a beautiful family he was living the American Dream. Then, a lab accident set off a chain of events his life was unprepared for. He quickly discovered that control is simply a delusion. Like an onion, his past begins to be peeled away pushing him on a journey to discover what he was becoming and more importantly what he came from. (LOGO TO LEFT)
Panel 1 – Man on cliff overlooks river, fall foliage in full bloom. Man is disheveled. Looks like he has been running away from something for a while. Distant shot showing how far he is in the wilderness. Also showing how alone he is.
Caption – ten months, seventeen days and four hours ago my life ended…
Caption – … I found out last night
Panel 2 – Close up of a man looking stressed. His clothes are wrinkled with some rips. There is some deep scaring on his face that leads to his sunglasses. Nothing too fancy on the glasses. These have not been modified for him like Cyclops. Just glasses to cover his eyes.
RS (thought box): He said the bluff. Where is he?
Panel 3 - Looking at his hands as if there is something wrong. Nothing wrong is evident
RS (thought box): I have to find him and tell him everything before they find me…
Panel 4 – Over the shoulder shot heading in to the woods
RS (thought box): I need my side out. This was not the way it was supposed to go…
ABOVE TITLE: What if everything you believed in was an illusion created by someone else?
TITLE: Coulomb’s Law
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Labels: christopher hill, comic book, graphic novel, john watson, the primordium, tim lai
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